Hi Lachlan, You did a lot of poems and I am very impressed with all of them, especially the Limerick. I can’t believe you wrote most of them by yourself. I think you could have made your slide more interesting because half-way through your presentation I lost interest. Other than that, I think your poems were all awesome. Keep it up! Aaliyah
Thanks for that feedback Aaliyah and I understand what you mean when you lost interest throughout half of the slide. I will be working to do that with future slideshows of mine. Byeee!!!
Hi Lachlan, My name is kesa, I attend St pius catholic school and while scrolling down your slide show of poems caught my eye. It's very shocking of how many poems you wrote, I hope next time you do your slides properly because I also lost interest while going through it.
Hi Lachlan , You have written a lot of poems , This is interesting but some of these have too much information that it is gets kind of boring. First it was really good.
Hi Lachlan. My name is Thomas and I go to St Pius x Catholic school, I love the first poem, I really like how you were already starting to rhyme in the first sentence, I really like how you said you were cocky.
Hi Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a lot of poems and I am very impressed with all of them, especially the Limerick. I can’t believe you wrote most of them by yourself. I think you could have made your slide more interesting because half-way through your presentation I lost interest. Other than that, I think your poems were all awesome.
Keep it up!
Aaliyah
Thanks for that feedback Aaliyah and I understand what you mean when you lost interest throughout half of the slide. I will be working to do that with future slideshows of mine.
DeleteByeee!!!
Hi Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteMy name is kesa, I attend St pius catholic school and while scrolling down your slide show of poems caught my eye. It's very shocking of how many poems you wrote, I hope next time you do your slides properly because I also lost interest while going through it.
Well done !!
Thanks Akesa for the feedback and I will put that into mind in later slideshows that I do so it is more intresting.
DeleteByeee!!!
Hi Lachlan ,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a lot of poems ,
This is interesting but some of these have too much information that it is gets kind of boring. First it was really good.
Great work
Hi Lachlan.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Thomas and I go to
St Pius x Catholic school,
I love the first poem, I really
like how you were already starting
to rhyme in the first sentence,
I really like how you said you
were cocky.
Thomas, Have a Great Day :)