Kia ora Lockie, My name is Hannah and I am from your tuhi mai, tuhi atu class. I am a 11 year old, year 6 in room 1 at Wainui Beach School.
I really liked your father's day poem. That was very thoughtful for your dad. My dad also loves chocolate. I hope your dad had a awesome fathers day. Maybe next time you could preview your blog post before you blog it because it might not annoy you, but some of your text is a different size to the rest of your poem. From Hannah.
Kia ora Lockie,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hannah and I am from your tuhi mai, tuhi atu class. I am a 11 year old, year 6 in room 1 at Wainui Beach School.
I really liked your father's day poem. That was very thoughtful for your dad. My dad also loves chocolate. I hope your dad had a awesome fathers day. Maybe next time you could preview your blog post before you blog it because it might not annoy you, but some of your text is a different size to the rest of your poem.
From Hannah.
Hi Hannah, I really appreciate the feedback from your comment.
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